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PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 3:19 pm    Post subject: Karin: Maid Reply with quote Edit/Delete this post Delete this post View IP address of poster

Ok, we seem to have come to an agreement on some actual storyline for Karin. So here is the thread, moving on to the Artists:

Karin in the Basement

OVERVIEW:
enabled: Harem Ending, Karin Sex Slave Ending
This ending isn't the true good Karin ending and is more of a slave ending system. Every time you level up her memory, a little H scene happens.

Starts with the "cleaning" (cleaning=blowjob) after maid level (becoming maid brought her to 20%, she starts cleaning you at 40%). Shower scene, explained a few posts down, will occur here. This is after the first blowjob scene, which will occur when you level her to 40%. the blowjob frame (already done) will be added as a separate option in the basement.

Then at 60% playmate level, we have a frame of instead of cleaning, you can touch her area but she won't let you put it in. basically a 69 scene. gun scene explained below occurs at 60%, is basically the gun scene explained earlier in the thread, but it happens specifically after the 69 is over. You are playing with / examining the gun, while sitting on your bed. more about that below. It will have a 69 frame, and that 69 frame will be added as an option in the basement.

69 Scene: 69 frame is on player's bed, can probably use Mefisto's bed background, maybe zoomed in, since we want most of the picture to be the player and Karin. It could alternatively be in the basement. Remember, do not draw them with the background, the background and forground are seperate in flash, so the backgrounds can be reused.
Dialog can be created later for the H-scene. frame one with Karin sucking, while player is licking. The second Frame can be the same picture, with white semen around Karins mouth, maybe a change in her expression, I leave that up to the artist. Finally, an optional third frame with Karin not sucking anymore but instead mouth open eyes shut, as she comes. I also leave it up to the artists whether or not they want to draw this or not.


At 80%, vaginal frame is possible. Also small conversational scene about her remembering doing this in the future (or something else I'm just coming up with crap here Razz). "Vaginal" button added in basement.

then last memory upgrade 95% is anal. Meaning, when you go in the basement, there will be four extra buttons. "cleaning" "touching" "vaginal" "anal", each one will be enabled at the appropriate level. And we need one last conversational scene, containing the "I remember coming back to shoot someone... but I don't remember who" dialog.

so, summary:

    H-Scenes: (one frame each)
  • Blowjob (already done)
  • 69
  • vaginal
  • Anal


    After-Scenes: (multiple frames with dialog)
  • Shower (occurs after blowjob, already done)
  • Toy Gun (occurs after 69)
  • ? Scene to be created (occurs after vaginal)
  • ? Scene to be created (occurs after anal)



Toy Gun scene


occurs as soon as you "ask" and level her to maid 60% and you first 69 with her. This can occur 1 week after you make her a maid. She starts the scene watching you from by your side at the bed (you're sitting on your side of the bed with your legs hanging over, examining the gun, frame 1), then she gets up, and stands full frontal in front of you (frame 2). She is talking at first, but when she grabs the gun, we need another pic of her holding a gun at you (frame 3). possibly an optional pic of the player with a sweatmark, holding his hands up, with her holding the gun. And then finally, a frame of her with her gun arm at her side (or not holding the gun at all), not pointing it at you anymore while she is recounting a memory that just came to her.


Artist Guide: First frame is from the player side of the bed, player sitting with his legs hanging over the side, examining the gun in his hands (the gun, or possibly the bedsheets, hide the player's crotch area). Karin is watching the player from the other side of the bed, so from the camera's point of view, she is behind the player, looking over his shoulder almost. She is looking at the gun. Maybe even giving the player a backrub? Twisted Evil.

Second frame is from 180 degrees in the opposite direction, through the player's eyes. Karin is now standing full frontal in front of the player, talking to the player. Since she is interested in the gun, she can be leaning forward, almost sexy, with a happy face, possibly the face from her in her maid outfit in the basement. Pretty straight forward, only thing that needs to be drawn is Karin, Naked, standing as if she is talking to the player and leaning in. Enthusiastically, obviously happy.

Third frame occurs with Karin basically in a full frontal, standing up stance, except she has grabbed the gun, and is no longer smiling. She is pointing it straight at you.

so, to aid in development of frames, for the second and third frames I have some examples:

Frame 2: since she is facing you, face from this first perspective:


but probably more happy and talking like the second picture here:


As for the stance, I have nothing to currently post as an example.


onto frame 3:



this face for frame 3. This can be the stance for frame 3, except from a full frontal point of view instead of low angle. Also with the arm below:


arm for frame 3 here, face for frame 3 is in the one above this one. Frame 3 could even be this close in if you wanted it to be.


alternate stance for good measure. Just for helpful perspective.

To help you guys visualize whats going on, I'm including the dialog here:
frame 1:
<player is playing with the gun in this picture, at the head of the bed with legs over the side. Karin is lying on the bed at his side looking at him, she is on his side of the bed on his right (or as mentioned earlier, she could be behind him looking over his shoulder, or giving back rub.)>
(What am I doing? She's from the future!)
(I should have told Ami about her... I have no right to be doing this with her!)
(Did I just slept with a girl who was trying to change who I was! She shot me... with this gun)
*grabs the gun from a drawer by the bed, and points it out*
(She shot me, just like that... and my whole world changed...)

Frame 2:
<Karin is now standing full frontal in front of the player, leaning in enthusiastically and talking to him about the gun. The picture is of Karin from the player's perspective.>
karin notices the gun: 'hey what's that toy you have there'
player : 'toy?...that's no toy'
karin : 'it's no toy? can it do something'
player : 'yes and they aren't to be played with' (I better put this away)
karin : 'yet you still did...'
player : 'no'
*grab*

Frame 3:
<Karin is in the same position, in front of the player, but standing full upright, pointing the gun straight at the player. This pic can be from the side, or again from the player's point of view, only need to draw Karin pointing the gun at the camera that way.>
karin : '...don't be shy...tell another lie'
player: 'okay okay I was playing!'
player: (not again! I knew I shouldn't have had it out with her around!)

Frame 4
<Same picture as Frame 3, but Karin has either put down the gun, or lowered her arm. She could have lightened up, or still has the stern look on her face, remembering the past.>
karin: 'good.'
player: 'by the way...how did you know I lied?'
karin: 'I remember my instructor at the academy. he told me how to hold it.'
karin: 'I wasn't good at it, it took me weeks to learn it...i remember that was quite humiliating.'
karin: 'I remember how I suddenly aimed the gun at the group during training and they all stopped laughing'
player: 'you remember anything else? names? faces?'
karin: 'no.....but that look on your face just yet is certainly one to remember'
player: 'ok Karin. Go back to bed now.'
Karin: 'Yes Master.'
next day starts

shower scene:




shower scene already completed by sim man, posted it here for related content.

As for the Vaginal and Anal scenes, How they look I leave up to you artists imagination. If you guys want any ideas, or clarifications, let me know.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 3:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote Edit/Delete this post Delete this post View IP address of poster

*attempts to read the whole post*
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THUMP! *faints*


Whatever I managed to read, looks good. ^_^
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 9:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote Edit/Delete this post Delete this post View IP address of poster

Wow, we have our work ahead of us.
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 11:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote Edit/Delete this post Delete this post View IP address of poster

yes, yes you do, but don't be daunted. In all, the Karin storyline has 10, maybe 15 new frames needed (not counting restaurant). That seems like a lot right now, but I figure we have it by Christmas, and then during Christmas we will have a holiday simgirls fanart competition methinks. We need one sort of "School Christmas Party" event, and I figure over winter break I'll post all the school backgrounds for that. After that, who knows, I may pass the storyline tracks solely over to chewyman and epne and other participants, and take up some coding and see if we can't have a new version of the game with Karin done out by then, and maybe even implement Kotomi's Gymnasium stuff.

^^ that timeline is pretty loose, I mean 6 months for the Karin thing when Kotomi took 1? We should be just fine so don't get too discouraged.
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 11:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote Edit/Delete this post Delete this post View IP address of poster

...6 months to long...
...i started right away...
...i finished a karin drawing...
...its pre colouring and she has no eyes yet...
...opinions?...

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 11:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote Edit/Delete this post Delete this post View IP address of poster

hmmm, it could definitely work, I'd recommend dragonvalor do the coloring cause he is good at it, but try your hand at it again if you like. Remember, Karin is fairly light skinned, especially given that she is staying in the basement. the player should have a slight orange tan, nothing too strong. And the rest I'm sure you can get from the game pictures. Good job working on it. I'd recommend making Karin's arms a little thinner.

Also, I scripted the vaginal and anal pictures but haven't brought them to this section yet, but I might as well. I guess this will be vaginal. Her eyes should be shut and her teeth grit in pain for one frame (or any other example of painful expression you would prefer to draw), while the second frame, which is more like the one you are drawing, should have mouth open and an expression of ecstasy. Great job, keep it up!


If you plan to move on to anal, wait till I bring the scripting over for that
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 10:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote Edit/Delete this post Delete this post View IP address of poster

I have a question, does karin have to be naked in all the pics? I'm doing one now so if I can put clothes I want to be consistent.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 10:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote Edit/Delete this post Delete this post View IP address of poster

pretty much Karin is naked in all the pics Smile The game has most fo the clothed pics for all the girls, we are doing the endings and fanservice materials, where there will be quite a bit of naked ladies Wink.

Karin will be clothed in some of the later pics, but I think we have MOST of those pics already done. I need to post them, I know, but I can't, I have to move to my college first.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 10:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote Edit/Delete this post Delete this post View IP address of poster

Ok, gotcha. My tolerance for nudity has returned, so I'll probably be able to churn out a few before going insane again. Wink
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tolerance for nudity?!?! say what?
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It means I can be asked to draw women w/ a lot of skin w/o reaching for the nearest deadly weapon. Although I like viewing hentai as much as the other guy, drawing it is a different thing altogether.
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you feel guilty about it? Like you're doing something sinful or something?
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 11:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote Edit/Delete this post Delete this post View IP address of poster

Not really, I don't have any qualms w/ it, it's more like I'm not compatible w/ drawing hentai.
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...............

/not comprehending
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Well, let me put it this way, there are some people you can get along instantly & some for no apparent reason you can't stand at all. You have high compatibility w/ the ones you can get along & low compatiblity w/ the ones you can't stand. That's the way I am w/ drawing hentai. Even though hentai looks easier to draw since you don't have to bother w/ things like clothes, drawing hentai is more difficult, more maddening, & a lot less enjoyable than it is compared to anime, even though hentai is easier to draw than anime.
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We will need pics of Karin in clothes for when she is working at the restraunt as well as her real good ending, so there is hope. ^_^

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yes yes that.... a minor detail Very Happy
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frame 2....
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That's looking very good! Though the boobs should look a bit more squished, since they are pressed together... ^_^
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and maybe more round they seem to have straightish lines in a few spots

and she looks too happy Laughing

hair looks perfect though Wink
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I kind of messed up w/ the boobs; I kind of slipped while doing it. The guide said she had to be happy, so I made her happy.

Cp, can you make your post sort of....simplified? I had to scroll a lot of times to see what you wanted for the pics.
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does anyone else think she looks straight out of hyrule with that expression? I just thought that was interesting, thats the first thing that came to mind. It looks mad good though, almost professionally drawn
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New postPosted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 8:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote Edit/Delete this post Delete this post View IP address of poster

...wow...
...that looks great...
...id kill for loires drawing instincts...
...im about to post my second drawing in a few minutes...
...sorry guys i fell asleep...
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New postPosted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 10:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote Edit/Delete this post Delete this post View IP address of poster

...ok here we go...
...the new karin drawing...
...now with eyes!...

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ramakandra wrote:
...wow...
...that looks great...
...id kill for loires drawing instincts...
...im about to post my second drawing in a few minutes...
...sorry guys i fell asleep...


Trust me, you don't.... they're so hard-wired it's hard to learn anything new w/ it.

I need a clearer shot of the gun, preferably side view.
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loire wrote:
frame 2....


She looks like she's got about six extra vertebrae.
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...you dont like tall girls?...
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